birthed for power

This is Marco, the first born in the vampire family in my book, Blood's Secrets. Please check it out, [link] the second chapter is in my gallery. I still have alot to write and I promise it won't be be like Twilight =.=, that was just a fail all together. Marco in the story is cold hearted and solemn. i honestly think he's the most attractive out of all of the brothers.